Sunday Snippet: Green-Eyed Monster

It's a drippy, dreary day, which actually doesn't bother me. It's been so dry in Ohio, and the rain might help wash all the allergy-inducing yuck away for a while.

Had a solid work week. I finished up a copy edit and started a new one. I'm wrapping up an extended coaching project and moving into the final stages before sending it out for the next steps. Started a new memoir developmental edit, and I'm excited about working on it with the author. I have a couple of other projects waiting in the wings, but my plate is full for the moment.

Doggo update. I think we're through the hard stuff. Who knew having a congested dog could be so exhausting. It sucks because, unlike when my kiddos didn't feel well, the dog can't verbalize what's making them feel poorly. A lot of trial and error to make sure they're doing okay.

Had an okay viewing week. I got through most of my usual shows with the exception of Lower Decks. I ran out of steam and couldn't get that one in.

Started with Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries and enjoyed the episode. The ending always make me smile with Hugh and Dottie getting engaged and Jack and Phryne drinking wine from grapes … that she crushed with her feet.

Watched another episode of Foyle's War and remembered most of it. I'd actually forgotten the underlying thread of Rex being in love with Andrew and Foyle's supportive reaction to the information. A very good episode.

Finished up season fourteen of Death in Paradise. I'm kind of curious about Patterson's departure. If he's really leaving the show, I'll be disappointed as he's been with it since the beginning. However, a changing of the guard isn't always a bad thing. I have a fun thought about who could possibly replace him and if it pans out, it would be very cool.

Enjoyed another episode of Poirot. I really do like the episodes that don't involve a murder. The bond robbery ended up being a lot of fun. Poor Hastings being seasick and his denial of it was a fun side thread.

Elementary had another solid episode. I'm enjoying Joan's journey of getting back to supportive interpersonal relationships. The scenes with her and Gregson were lovely.

Caught another episode of Batman Beyond and it's one I didn't really remember so I enjoyed watching. I think I'm almost through the second season and I can't really remember if there are more after this one or not.

That's it for the life update this week. Tonight's post is from Green-Eyed Monster, a novella that explores how the grass is greener after a breakup.

Here's the miniblurb:

Dani works undercover sting operations and inadvertently shoots the girlfriend of Neal, one her coworkers. When the green-eyed monster of jealousy rears its head, Dani isn't sure how to help Neal through the trauma, but she'll move whatever stands in the way to make sure he's happy.

And a snippety peek…

Dani shoved the green-eyed monster back in its hole.

She snagged one of his fingers with one of hers. "I don't have any easy answers, but I do understand where you're coming from." She met his gaze. "When you left, I had something of a wake-up call. What we do isn't just difficult." Fighting the urge to glance away, she got right down to the specific point. "It's hard and bloody more often than not. And it means trust is a commodity unless it's freely given." She stopped there, hoping he'd understand.

He gave a nod. "I know. And it's harder to give if you've been burned." He squeezed her finger.

He did get it.

She changed the topic, just a little. "So ... based on everything you've said tonight ... you and Kyra? No happily ever after?" Her heart hurt for him even if she didn't want them together.

His lips curved in a sad smile. "There is no happily ever after. I don't think they actually happen anymore." He shrugged.

Dani traced the back of his hand. "Does Kyra know?"

Neal shook his head. "Not yet. The whole shootout kind of interrupted a gentle letdown." One side of his mouth kicked up.

Dani closed her eyes. "Man, I'm sorry." Truly suck ass timing on everyone's part.

Neal rolled a shoulder. "And I won't do it here. I might be cynical, but I strive to keep the asshole behavior to a minimum."

Dani chuckled. "Except with me." Not that she didn't deserve it sometimes.

Neal turned his palm upward. "Yeah. Probably true."

Dani tilted her head. "Have you ever wondered why?"

Neal huffed out a breath. "I know why. Because no matter what, you'll call me on it."

Dani took the opening that statement provided. "And you tried to call me on it, but I never listened. I always put the job first." She waited a beat. "I'm ready to listen now." She hoped he believed her.

Neal laced their fingers together. "You have suck-ass timing, Dans." He huffed out a breath.

She shrugged this time. "I know. But there's no rush." She got to her feet and let go of his hand. "If you decide you want happy for the moment, you know where to find me…"

This story is coming together in a way I'm very happy with. Dani is a little tricky and I love writing her.

 

That's it for this week. Happy reading!

Skylin

Sunday Snippet: Gotta Start Somewhere

Whew. What a week. We have some actual fall weather, and I love it. Who knows how long it will last. Pretty sure we'll have at least one more heat-up before December and the official start of winter.

Had another busy work week because I'm still playing catch up from being under the weather in late September. I finished a very challenging copy edit of a 95k-word manuscript. Great story with a lot going on.

Update on our doggo. She's doing so much better. She's still a little congested, but she finished her round of antibiotics and the steroid seems to be helping also. Of course, she's drinking a ton of water, which means we're going out for potty breaks about two times her normal rate.

Had a very slow viewing week. The challenging copy edit required a lot of focus. But I did make it most of the way through my regular shows.

Started again with Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries. Enjoyed the episode because it's one I remembered and loved on my original run through.

Caught another episode of Foyle's War and enjoyed watching again. I'd forgotten some of the key moments in this one. Sam sure struggled a bit to find another place to stay after her rooming house got bombed.

Enjoyed another episode of Death in Paradise. Really glad to see Mervin figure out his mom's murder and also so happy to see Mr. Sterling Fox get his walking papers. Smarmy jerk.

Watched another episode of Poirot. I always enjoy when Miss Lemon gets involved in a case. Watching Hasting completely destroy her filing system—after she told him not to touch anything—made me laugh out loud. In his defense, he'd already halfway trashed it before he spoke to her.

Elementary had another solid episode. It's very interesting to watch Sherlock interact with Moreland. So much trauma to unpack between them.

I didn't get to check in with Batman Beyond or Lower Decks this week. I'm hoping to get a full run this upcoming week.

That's it for the life update. Tonight's post is from Gotta Start Somewhere, a novella about a couple that get to know each other on an undercover mission.

Here's the miniblurb:

Colleagues, Justine and Thatcher, work for a private security company and finally land a mission together. When things go sideways and the duo gets trapped behind the safe zone, they have to lay low and wait for an extraction. There's no better time to discover what else they might have in common.

And a snippety peek…

Thatcher settled on his bunk and did a quick memory refresh about Justine Holden. "Nice to finally get an opportunity to work with her." He didn't get a chance to know her when they went through training.

But he'd noticed her. And heard nothing but good things about Justine from others who had worked with her. She had a solid record of getting the job done.

Kicking back, he gave a nod. "Probably a good thing we didn't take the same route getting here." He'd had one relationship with another trainee that busted up soon after they finished.

He'd avoided going out with anyone else at the firm since.

Rubbing a hand over his jaw, he shrugged. "Might be time to make an exception." He liked the vibe she had.

She always greeted everyone with a quick smile and had a distinctive laugh. One that always made him wonder if he'd just missed something amazing. Maybe he'd get to find out.

He didn't know what branch of the military she'd come from, but her qualifications listed familiarity with the UCMJ. A good thing in his book … especially when traveling to another country. Sometimes things could get dicey, and having others who could operate within legal parameters counted as a bonus.

The Brownwells were a nice couple with the misfortune of having a family estate bordering directly on a drug cartel's holdings. There shouldn't be any issues, but bringing a security team in while they settled everything and sold the property would be a good move.

Thatcher wished he spoke Spanish, but knowing at least three others on the team spoke the language helped ease his mind. "Can't wait to hear more from Justine on how she operates." He'd never met anyone who could read and understand but struggled to converse.

Maybe she could teach him? He'd like an excuse to spend time with her. Who knew … if he picked up the ability to read Spanish, he might be able to add more languages to his knowledge base.

He snorted. "If I don't drive her insane trying to figure it all out." He'd have to come up with something he could teach her.

A nice tradeoff sounded pretty good right now.

Not quite sure where this one is going to go. The sages are whispering ideas that deviate from the plan … and I'm weirdly okay with that.

 

That's it for this week. Happy reading!

Skylin

Sunday Snippet: Gone Fishing

Hello October and welcome spooky season! I love this month for a lot of reasons. The spooky vibe being close to the top of the list, but it's quickly followed by cooler weather—usually—and that means it's soup weather! I love making soup on a cool day and savoring it with crusty breads, grilled cheese, and other creative toppings.

I'm through the worst of the yuck and back to almost normal. Of course, that means something else went sideways. In my case, our older doggo ended up with an emergency trip to the vet because her congestion got so bad her eye swelled up. She's on a steroid and broad-spectrum antibiotic and already seems to be much better already.

I'm slowly getting caught up on my work projects. I need to review the details of two new ones now that my brain isn't in sludge mode. I'm pretty excited about my last quarter of work projects for 2025.

Had an okay viewing week. I didn't quite make it through the whole slate of shows. Lower Decks and Reacher didn't make this week's window.

I did watch another episode of Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries. I'm working my way through season two and I'm enjoying the conflict and tension because it's a real-life quandary. I love Mac for being a voice of reason.

Caught another Foyle's War episode and this is one I'd forgotten. It's so weird how a lot of the themes of this show, which is twenty-some odd years old, are so very prevalent today. Humans are slow learners sometimes.

Death in Paradise ended up being very enjoyable. I'm really not sure about this new police commissioner other than he's way too smarmy and utter unlikable.

Poirot entertained with a way back episode showing how Hastings and Poirot kind of got their start together. Very much enjoyed this one.

Watched another episode of Elementary and quite enjoyed the twisty turns it took. Also loved Joan solving the neighbor issue. Love to see that kind of stuff.

Caught another Batman Beyond and it's one I didn't really remember either. Quite enjoyed the rewatch.

That's it for the life update. Tonight's post is from Gone Fishing, a novella that got a start with a writing community prompt.

Here's the miniblurb:

A year after college graduation, Quaille Ramsey and Franz Herman get together with a group of their friends for a summer vacation at a state park. Quaille recently broke up with a long-time boyfriend and Franz is ready to make a move, something he never took a chance on during school. Quaille isn't quite ready for something serious but she definitely sees possibilities for the future with Franz.

And a snippety peek…

Franz walked out to the dock and dove into the clear water of the lake. With a lazy crawl, he swam to the floating pier and pulled himself up onto the boarded surface. Swiping a hand over his eyes, he gazed back toward the cabins.

"I can't believe Quaille decided to come this year." About damn time.

Having her here made him happy. She needed to find her groove again, and hopefully he'd get to make his move. Finally.

After too many years of waiting and wondering from afar.

Their friend group had been doing the state park summer vacation thing for all four years of undergrad. Quaille missed the first year due to a job commitment and the last three because her boyfriend didn't see the appeal of bonding with anyone but Quaille.

Franz snorted. "His loss." Franz couldn't ask for a better group of friends.

Especially Caitlyn Mitchell, who came through by talking Quaille into—okay, more like insisting—joining them for a fun-filled extravaganza before heading off for after-grad careers. So far, none of their group of eight had anything set in stone. Franz had two interviews scheduled with local news organizations. Caitlyn had a trial offer with a hospital. Quaille would be headed for a local theater before deciding if she wanted to pursue a master's. Trey and Wayne were going to try their luck in a neighboring state for news radio. Jazz and Miranda had contracts for costuming three plays through the end of the year. Last but not least, Chet decided to go the per diem route with a family practice until he decided what he wanted to get into.

All in all, eight people on the cusp of the next step of life.

Leaning back on his elbows, Franz chuckled. "And we're all equal parts confident and clueless." Not the best combination … but having friends to keep each other honest helped.

Trey and Caitlyn were the ringleaders—or instigators, depending on one's point of view. They organized group events, set up study sessions for finals, and always had two teams for quiz nights on campus. Supposedly, they had some kind of camp games planned for their two-week vacation at the state park.

Franz gently kicked his feet in the water. "Should be interesting if we include water battles." Fishing, swimming, and maybe kayaking … a mix of all three would keep all of them on their toes.

Did Quaille do any of the trio? Franz honestly didn't know. She could end up being a secret weapon. He could build on her fish go comment earlier. Find out if she could hold her own with a rod and reel.

He nodded. "If she's terrible at fishing, I can bolster the team." He grinned. "But if she's good … we'll trounce the competition."

Either way, it would be fun to find out.

I only have two scenes written for this one, but I'm excited to see where things go with Franz and Quaille.

 

That's it for this week. Happy reading!

Skylin